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[Adrellia Village #38: SE]

It wasn't very well written. I didn't laugh one time. The backgrounds and scenes were lazy and some of them were just stolen images. The animation was choppy and sloppy. The voice acting was very poor and had no feeling.

Usually I would say this is fine for a beginner's animation, but since there hasn't been any improvement since your first contribution to the site. Maybe spend some more time on the art and writing a better concept. I honestly don't know how your score got as high as it did.

Keep working hard and I'm sure you'll improve in no time.

MistyE responds:

Stolen images? The Fred poster and the fireplace are the only props in this entire animation that wasn't drawn in Flash. The animation is something I'll work on, and the voicing cast has been replaced.

I personally think this is a great improvement since Adrellia Village #1, but I can guarantee that episode 39 will see some improvements. I'll spend more time on the animation, and regarding the writing, this is only the start of a fairly long series.

Thank you for your review, your advice will be taken into consideration for the next episode.

[The lost and found bagel]

Pure Awesome

Very good, but that statement at the end of it was completely uncalled for. You should be ashamed of yourself... :P

But seriously, very original, very well animated, nice concept, just wish that rat didn't have to die..... he was hungry, he hadn't eatin in weeks and that bagel was a huge jerk face........ that is all.

turtleco responds:

OMG ITS CALLED A FUKCING JERK OIMEG SINFGIOSNGINQWIN~~!!!

[The Choice]

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Pretty good yall. Animation was choppy but the artwork was great. Voices were a little low but who cares I could still hear what he was saying. Very suttle humor but wished I could have seen into that Censored bubble... if only ;O

Aigis responds:

I'm not going to lie, most of the 48 hours were spent drawing what was in that censored bubble.

[Monochrome Art Collab]

Very nice, very nice indeed

Music was very fitting for this occasion. Lots of great art. Had forgotten that this was even still going. Good work guys and galls. Also, i lol'd cause I could instantly recognize Ely's and Ash's work.

J-qb responds:

Glad you like it, ash and ely do have pretty recognizable styles.

[Candy?]

Nice jorb guy!

Great for an hour job, funny, and reeeeally unexpected. I jumped a little when I saw that demon thingy-majig. Also, did you win the competition?

Chimbley responds:

yup :)

[Christmatch Deathmas]

lol... wut?

Great idea, really funny. Music scared the crap out of me though (so loud!!). Was a little disappointed there was no fight scene. Keep up the good work.

Breaktroll responds:

Yeah, I dissapointed myself a little there too. But I'm glad you still liked it. :)

[The Game Trailer Collab]

Damn You!!

Why will no one make a seal clubbing game! Oh, maybe GTA: Antartica!

Archawn responds:

It is a question best left to be answered by PETA.

[Music Lovers 2]

Awesome

Took me a while to realize it was a loop, but after I hit the mute button it was still in my head. (you yellow bellied chicken)

Icandraw responds:

a while :D